I really liked the melody, but you really didn't do much with it. If you made more parts where the melody changes, but still has the same feeling, it would be awesome. You should work on it, and then make a "v2".
I be fiven when the time comes!
k thx bye
Friggin asome dude!
I must have more! You rock!
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